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[雅思英语写作] 雅思写作范文:促进人民健康的方法

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  Some people believe that improve public health should increase the number of sports facilities; others believe that it has little effects and need other measures to improve it.

  Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  本题是政府政策类话题和健康类话题的结合。考题虽新,但政府类话题和健康类话题话题却是经常出现的。考到政府政策类的话题,有一个思路总是可以通用的,那就是:政府可以通过教育来提升人们对于......的认识下面的范文是雅思中国网海外考试研究中心研究员撰写的高分范文,其中就有对该思路的体现,值得借鉴。

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  The construction of new sports facilities are definitely needed in an environment where peoples health is in a declining state. However, there are those who believe that the way to improving peoples health should lie in other measures that governments have to come up with to get people to live more healthily.

  In many countries around the world, sports facilities are diminishing at an alarming rate, with existing ones being threatened with closure or face redevelopment in favor of housing and commercial development. The lack of sports facilities has directly led to a sharp decline in the general publics involvement in sports activities, which is the major culprit for ill health and excessive weight nowadays. If a wider range of sports and fitness facilities were available, then people would be more willing to spend time in these facilities to train their bodies and to improve their fitness, instead of living a sedentary life at home watching television, playing video games or using computers.

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