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[雅思英语写作] 雅思高分作文 范文+解析

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  下面雅思为大家整理了雅思高分作文 范文+解析,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。

  Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagreeSome feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the real world when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evidentbut in fact require closer examination.

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  1+ 1模式,最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊,它的确否定了前面所提到的观点,从而表达出了自己的观点,此外还引出了下文。

  特别是最后半句:but in fact require closer examination ,感觉是在抛砖引玉。

  The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buckand are thus naturally better suited to stretching moneywhen times get tough in adulthood. Inverselythe children of wealthy familiesthoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouthsare believed to be completely ignorant of the value of moneyhaving had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood. They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This beliefthough logicaloverlooks one key point which isof courseeducation.

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