小作文:- 图表作文 1. Summarize 写作目的、最重要的信息 2. Make comparisons 归类、 控制好下面的内容: 1、 开篇:明确指出文章的写作目的 a) 随着时间,变化 b) 大小的比较 2、 结尾:结合写作目的,明确的给出图表中最为重要的信息 a) 看变化:哪些对象上升,哪些对象下降,哪些不变 b) 看比较:哪个对象是最好王者 3、 细节分类讨论,给出一些支持结论的证据或过程 分段模式:2+X 开篇: 1) 重点要突出写作目的change or compare CC 2) 名词照抄,动词和抽象名词替换,时间和地点不变,但要突出指代 下面是一篇以描述比较为主的文章范例:选材 e.g. Cambridge 8Test 1 The chart compares the proportions of overgrazing, over-cultivation, deforestation and others. The table compares the percentages of overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation in North America, Europe and Oceania during 19902000. 文章的开篇与提示句不同之处在于:你是在看过图表后产生的具体的描述。 结尾: Overall, it is clear that overgrazing, over-cultivation and deforestation are main causes of global land degradation, and that the primary causes of land degradation in the three areas were different : North America , Europe , and Oceania , and Europe had the most seriously affected land of the three countries. |