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Topic： A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it. 接下来分析一下这道题目，应该说上过我的作文课的学生会发现这次的题目不难写，因为我在课上重点分析过类似的题目。从结构上来说，这个题目毫无疑问适合用三对一结构来进行写作。以下为参考结构： 第一段：开头段 Introduce the topic Statement 第二段：让步段 第三段：重点段 第一句：过渡句 第二句：分论点一 The practice potentially hinders the economic development in most countries. 第三句: Theoretical Evidence Abandonning non-essential flight-Employees in related fileds such as international tourist guides are likelty to become unemployed-Soaring unemployement rate-Economic development suffers 第四句: 分论点二 The practice is likely to bring about great financial disaster to some countries whose economy relies on tourism to a large extent. 第五句：Case Evidence | 
