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[雅思英语写作] 雅思真题作文点评:电视对青少年的影响

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  TV has become an indispensable pare of childrens lives nowadays, which 定语从句关系词应该跟先行词挨在一起are made more colorful by all kinds of kids TV program. In this way, it is no denied denial / deny that children can learn many much knowledge which cant be accessed both at home and school, even though watching TV may do harm to childrens eyes. Therefore, I hold the point of view that parents and teachers should encourage children to watch TV regularly. 不错的开头,因为摆脱了模板,并且在引题的同时,通过摆出双方分论点,让开头显得很充实

  For one thing, children are under stresses due to heavy studying loan at school, where in contrast, as a lively medium, TV can make children be refreshed from a days hard work and relax enables children get relieved from heavy load of schooling, so that more leisure time could be enjoyed. For example, many cartoons, on which children are really keen, not only tell interesting stories to children, but also can teach children how to distinguish beauty from natural ?, since the cartoon usually come from philosophy stories. 展开合理

  for another, many parents are busy with their work and have no enough spare time to accompany their children, especially on weekend, so children can spend the alone time on watch TV. fill their time with Many kinds of TV programs, such Animal World, English Teaching Program, are very useful to help children to widen their horizons and learn more communication sills. Some parents do not always do these things very well.

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