每次见到囊中羞涩的学生,尤其是高中生写作文时,他们总是憋得满脸通红却倒 不出几滴洋墨水,我总是告诉他们,用简单的expressions来表达你们的ideas。他们却抱怨没有现成简单的范文可参考。现在我用他们的囊中之物--高中单词量写出 七分的Version120,这是被认为雅思最难的作文之一。 Version 120 What are the purposes of the places such as museums, and how should they be funded? ----------------------Discussion-----285words in total------------------ Introduction It is well known that a museum is a building to display a collection of scientific, historical,cultural or natural objects. Undoubtedly museums can have many purposes in the city; I would like to mention two of them as following. Body1 Visiting museums can give you much information. If you visit a museum, you may better understand a subject which you are studying, because you can see some objects which cannot be seen on books. For example, after visiting a scientific museum, you may be able to describe a spaceship in a wider way and say something very specific. I believe that your classmates would admire you a lot. |