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[雅思英语写作] 雅思写作十大“见官死”开头

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  雅思写作的开头有多重要?这个不用我说大家想必都心理有数,雅思写作的开头就是给阅卷官产生第一个直接好坏印象的地方,一恶搞好的雅思写作开头往往就能给高分打下了良好的基础,而一个差的雅思写作开头甚至会毁了一篇好的文章内容。

  雅思写作见官死开头之一:废话满天飞

  典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  This topic is very interesting. Im very interested in talking about this topic. Because Im also a college student and Im not married

  修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题

  In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married

  Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? 真题)

  Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

  Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

  Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isnt it? Of course! Its really very very important!

  雅思写作见官死开头之二:中式英文人见人晕

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