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[雅思英语写作] 雅思写作范文:年轻人的行为

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  写作题目

  Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young people should be free to behave as individuals.

  Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  题目大致意思:到底年轻人是应该遵守传统,还是可以被允许有自由的行为?

  隐形模板:起3承6转6合3

  起--允许年轻人自由取舍传统,视传统为历史的导师,而不是未来的狱警。

  承--年轻人自由抗拒不好的传统束缚,如此社会才能进化。

  转--全力保卫优良的传统价值,如此相传社会的文化遗产。

  合--年轻人在行为上分辨理性的活传统与非理性的死传统。

  IELTS Example Essay

  Every generation, young and old, should be allowed freedom to deal with the breaking down of certain patterns and standards being handed down from the past. As individuals, young people are particularly keen to the need to end whatever tradition they think is unreasonable for the society. All rebellious minds think alike--tradition is a guide for the past but not a jailer for the future.

  Too often young men and women are enthusiastic about the evolution of beliefs and practices of their society, and their behaviors tend to challenge a number of elements of tradition. For that matter, mental independence is required because without an amount of freedom, tradition would be only an explanation for acting in conformity without thinking independently.

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