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[雅思英语写作] 雅思写作范文:年轻人崇拜明星

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  写作题目

  Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

  题目写作思路分析

  大纲:逻辑心图,四段定位,18句装配。

  起--好现象,因为对年轻人来说,既是心态正常又是反应社会发展,与道德考虑无关。

  承--理由例子细节。年轻人崇拜明星是极其正常的心里历程,无关道德榜样。

  转--理由例子细节。年轻人崇拜明星是反应媒体社会的影响,无关道德榜样。

  合--整体而言是好现象,到底青年人免不了崇拜明星,所以道德的联想应该摆在一边。

  范文

  There is no need to be overly preoccupied with the fantasy images of stars standing out from the rest on the screen, the stage and the playing field because celebrity worship is part of everyday life, particularly among adolescents. That young people are admiring media and sports celebrities is socially normal outside the academic and behavioral context. Accepting that it is good and natural to be young, then it is inevitable for young people to be obsessed with certain personalities as their ideal examples.

  Psychologically speaking, a certain amount of star admiration is normal. When young, becoming fans of favorite stars is a form of escapism and a way to dull emotional pain and stress; so, emulating celebrities is a natural part of development to identify themselves with their icons. Even in adulthood, people rank successful individuals highly and model themselves after them. In a global media culture, the lifestyle promoted by stars is often unattainable to the average person, regardless of whether it is realistic or ideal. Hence, the point is that young people choose their models for reasons based on renowned excellence in a specific field rather than on scandals that happen sometimes. That is, it is to admire what is shining in famous peoples career successes and not what happen to shadow their real lives.

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