在中国考生的雅思写作中,动词和形容词是主角,但是实际上,在真正的英语写作中,名词才是占据主导地位的词,这就是东西方的语言习惯的不同。想要拿到雅思8分以上就要对这个问题多加注意啦。 不要对动词、形容词过分依赖,要多用名词结构。 The sedentary and isolated lifestyle has become more and more popular and been accepted by more and more young people. 改:The sedentary and isolated lifestyle has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young people. conclude thatdraw a conclusion that visit some placepay a visit to some place investindevote an investment to be populargain its popularity be humoroushave a sense of humor be importantbe of importance be valuablebe of value be usefulbe of use be helpfulbe of help be efficientbe of efficiency 不要总是用有生命的名词或人称代词做主语: ⑴ Many people think that to set up a camera in the residential area is one of the best ways to ensure the security of the dwellers. 改:It is generally thought that to set up a camera in the residential area is one of the best approaches to ensure the security of the residents 。 |