通用版英语六级下册小升初专项训练：命题作文

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

假如你是约翰，请根据表格给出的信息，比较一下你与迈克的不同。

Name	Height	Weight	Hobby
John	1.60 metres	45 kilograms	reading
Mike	1.64 metres	52 kilograms	eating

 

 

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【答案】参考范文：

I’m John. I’m 1.60 metres tall, but my friend Mike is 1.64 metres tall. I am 45 kilograms. Mike is 52 kilograms. I like reading but he likes eating! We’re very different.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是根据表格提示进行写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。短文用第一人称，时态是一般现在时；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考单词：like喜欢，reading阅读，eating吃，different不同的

参考句型：I’m…；I’m…, but my friend Mike is…；We’re…

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

Tom通常6:30在家吃早饭。以前他喜欢吃快餐(fastfood)，现在他改变了。早饭他常常喝牛奶，吃面包和鸡蛋。中午他在学校吃一碗饭、一些肉和蔬菜。有时，他吃鱼。在晚上，他常常和他的家人一起吃晚饭。现在他比以前更健康(healthier)了。

根据以上信息完成写作。

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【答案】例文：

Tom usually has breakfast at home at 6:30. He liked to eat fast food before, but now he changes. For breakfast, he usually has some milk, bread and eggs. He has lunch at school. He often has some rice, meat and vegetables. Sometimes he has fish. In the evening, he often has supper with his family. Now Tom is healthier than before.

【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：较难

【题目】书面表达。

亲爱的同学，你的身体健康吗？怎样保持身体健康呢？请写一篇不少于30词的小短文。

How to Keep Healthy?

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How to Keep Healthy?

Everyone wants to be strong and healthy. How can we be strong and healthy? We need to brush our teeth and have breakfast in the morning. It's good for our health. We often have good food, such as vegetables, fish and fruit. We do exercise three times a week. And don't sleep too late or eat fast food.

【解析】

1.题干解读：这是一篇命题作文。保持健康要有一系列的措施，文章是一般现在时为主，注意满足词数要求。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考单词：brush our teeth刷牙，have breakfast吃早饭，eat fruit and vegetables吃水果或蔬菜，don't sleep late不熬夜，don't eat fast food不吃快餐，do exercise锻炼

参考句型：Everyone wants…；We need…；It’s…；We…

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

要点提示：在Mary的家里，Mary在玩她的玩具娃娃，Mary的哥哥Tom在画画，爸爸妈妈在看电视。Mary的小妹妹Lucy正在睡觉。

注意：根据所给提示描述图片，可增加其他内容，写一篇不少于40词的小短文。

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【答案】范例：

Today is Saturday. Everyone is at home. Mary is playing with her doll. The boy is Mary's brother，Tom. He is drawing a picture. Mary's parents are watching TV. She has a little sister. Her name is Lucy. What is she doing? She is sleeping.

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文，描述在Mary的家里，Mary的家人们正在做的事。结合图片提示完成这篇短文，短文主要以第三人称，本文主要是用正在进行时，注意主谓一致，be动词的形式，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。考查看图作文，首先要看懂图片，理解图片内容，写作时注意时态，人称变化，注意段落之间的发展和连贯，尽量使用不同长度的句子，适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅。

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】同学们，你坐过火车吗？在火车上你看到了什么呢？别人在做什么呢？以“On the train”为题写一篇小作文。

提示词：listen to music, read a book, sleep, play, eat

On the train

 

 

 

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On the train

My mother and I go to Tianjin today. We arrive at the train station. There are many people on the train. I see some girls listening to music. A woman is reading a book. An old man is sleeping. Some men are playing cards. And a baby is eating.

【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达，根据提示，以“My dream”为题写一篇小短文。

内容提示：

1. What is my dream?

2. Why do I have this dream?

3. How to make my dream come true?

要求：

1.不少于5句话；

2.条理清楚，语句通顺，拼写正确，书写规范；

3.不得出现真实的人名或校名等信息；

4.作文内容占4分，书写工整占1分。

My dream

Everyone has a dream. I want to be                                                              

 

 

 

 

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【答案】略

【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

用“be going to do sth”这一句型，写一篇小短文介绍一下你的周末计划。

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My weekend plan

I am going to have a busy weekend! On Saturday, I'm going to clean my room and do homework. Then, in the evening, I'm going to the supermarket with my mother. On Sunday, I'm going to the bookstore on foot. I'm going to buy some books. Then, I'm going to go home and read the new books. In the evening, I'm going to watch TV. That will be fun! What about you? What are you going to do on the weekend?

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是根据提示进行写作，题目My weekend plan《我的周末计划》内容简单，短文用第一人称，用一般将来时be going to do sth句型；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考单词：a busy weekend忙碌的周末，clean my room打扫房间，do homework做作业，going to the supermarket去超市，going to the bookstore去书店，read the new books看新书，watch TV看电视，be fun有趣的

参考句型：I am going to；What about you? What are you going to do…

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达

以fish 和fisherman 作为主人翁， 自编一个小故事， 逻辑合理， 有新意， 字数不低于40 词。 

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Fish

I am a fish. I am one year old. I live in the water. There are various kinds of fish in the world. Some are very common while others are very precious. In fact, fish has many functions and is vital to people's life. Fish is the main food for people. I am happy because I am such a beautiful gold fish. Gold fish isn’t delicious.

【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

请以“My Favourite Subject”为题写一篇作文，介绍你最喜欢的一门学科。

内容包括：说明你喜欢的理由，该学科每周有几节课，在课堂上你最喜欢做什么。并对该学科的老师做一个简单介绍。

要求：⑴书写认真，字迹清楚。⑵不要出现自己的真实姓名。⑶用5~6句话完成短文。

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My Favourite Subject

We have many kinds of subjects in school, such as math, Chinese, English, PE, science and so on. I like Chinese best. We have Chinese twice a week. We often read in Chinese class. Our Chinese teacher is tall and thin, but she's very kind and smart. We all like her.

【解析】

1.题干解读：此篇写作属于命题作文。同学们要严格按照写作提示内容表达每周有几节课以及课堂上的内容。重点描写最喜爱的学科以及该学科内容。注意使用一般现在时态表达写作内容。且关注句子数量要求。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考单词：many kinds of很多种；such as例如；twice a week一周两次

参考句型：I like…best；We have…；she’s…；We all like…

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

Carmen是一名时装模特，今年20岁。她身材苗条，饮食习惯和生活习惯健康，酷爱游泳运动，平时喜欢购物、交友、看电影等等。请你根据她的职业特点和爱好，发挥你的想象力，综合考虑住所的四周环境，为她选择一处理想的住所，并简要说明理由。60字左右。

Carmen’s ideal home

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【答案】范文：

There is a house. It is good for Carmen. It is across from a supermarket, because Carmen likes going shopping. And there is a gym behind the house, so Carmen can swim and run in the gym. Carmen likes going to the movies, but where is the cinema? Oh, it is near the house. Do you like Carmen’s house?

【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：较难

【题目】书面表达。

以“How to make a pumpkin lantern?”为题，写一篇英语小短文。

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【答案】参考范文：

How to make a pumpkin lantern?

First, you should prepare the materials you need, such as pumpkin, knives and candles. Then draw the nose and eyes on the pumpkin, dig it, and then, please open the top part, after that, put a candle inside, and finally close it.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是命题写作，内容简单，把相应的内容用英语表达出来即可。时态是一般现在时，第二人称及祈使句；注意词汇的选择，句型的运用。注意按制作步骤写。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考单词：prepare the materials准备的材料，pumpkin南瓜，knives and candles刀子和蜡烛，draw画，open打开，candle蜡烛，close关上

参考句型：First, you should…；Then draw…；And finally…

题型：书面表达 ※难度：较难

【题目】写作。

你的每日生活是怎么样的？你在哪些时间做哪些事呢？请写一写吧。（要求：至少50字） 

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【答案】略

【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达

请写出你一天的生活安排，要求写明时间，不少于5个句子。

Hi! My name is…… I get up at 7：00 in the morning. Then l…… I feel happy every day.

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【答案】范文:

Hi! My name is Lucy. I get up at 7: 00 in the morning. Then I brush my teeth and wash my face. I have breakfast at 7: 30. After breakfast I go to school with my sister. After school, I go home and do my homework. In the evening I watch TV. I feel happy every day.

【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】写作

请谈谈你的爱好或你朋友的爱好，写一写，不少于6句话、35个单词。 

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【解析】

略

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

以“Our school”为题，介绍自己的学校，不能少于5句话。

Our school

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Our school

Our school is very big and beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers in our school. It has twenty-five classrooms. Every classroom is big and clean. Our school also has a beautiful library and a big playground. In the city our school's playground is the biggest! I like our school very much. Welcome to visit our school.

【解析】

1. 这是一篇以“Our school”为题目的作文，短文主要以第一人称来写，用there be句型，描述作者的学校的样子，本文主要是用一般现在时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系且满足句子数量要求。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考单词：beautiful美丽的，a lot of很多，library图书馆，playground操场，welcome欢迎，visit参观

参考句型：Our school is…；There are…；It has…；I like…；Welcome to…

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

根据提示写一篇作文，介绍一下你的假期计划。

提示：

⒈ When and where will you go?

⒉ How will you get there?

⒊ How long will you stay there?

⒋ What will you do there?

⒌ Why do you want to do these things there?

My holiday plan

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My holiday plan

This holiday I will go to Beijing with my parents. We are going there by plane. We will stay in Beijing for five days. We will visit the Great Wall and Tian’anmen Square. We also want to visit the Palace Museum. We will take many pictures. I think it will be very interesting.

【解析】

1.题干解读：本篇作文是命题作文，根据问题写作，首先要回答所问内容，其次把答语按顺序组织起来，注意人称和时态，句子结构要正确。

2.参考词汇和句型：

参考单词：will将要，holiday plan假期计划，by car开车，by plane坐飞机，visit the Great Wall参观长城

参考句型：This holiday...；I will...

题型：书面表达 ※难度：较难

【题目】以“—次……之行”为题，写—篇不少于50个词的短文。

Suggested questions:

①Where have you been?

②Have you taken any photos?

③What are you doing in the photo?

④Do you enjoy your visit?   

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【答案】A trip to Xiamen

    I visited my hometown Xiamen this weekend. The famous tourist attraction Gu Lang Yu is now much more crowded than before.It is still fun to see the western-style buildings and to take go on the cruise. However, it now feels different because it is full of people. I liked visiting my grandparents. They cooked good meals for us. We took many photos with my grandparents. We enjoyed ourslves. 

【解析】

这是一篇以“ A trip to Xiamen”为题目的作文，结合提示句子完成这篇短文，短文主要以第一人称，描述作者一次旅行，本文主要是用一般过去时，注意主谓一致，写作中注意上下文的过渡要符合逻辑关系。

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

大作文，同学们，下面有三个题目：①My best friend②My school in the future③My favourite painting你喜欢哪个题目?请选择你喜欢的一个题目，并把题目抄写在标题的横线上，然后在试着写一篇作文，60个单词左右。

 

 

 

 

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【解析】

此篇写作属于命题作文。同学要从备选的三个题目中选择一个进行表达。

例如选择①My best friend我最好的朋友。要运用一般现在时态表达。要使用My best friend is...She/he is... She/he loves to...

例如选择②My school in the future，要运用一般将来时态will+动词原形表达。先介绍未来学校的概况。再具体描写有哪些先进的特点。最后点题。

例如选择③My favourite painting，要运用一般现在时态表达。首先介绍My favorite painting is...其次讲述原因Because it is...最后点题。

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

给的题目写话，要求三种句型，至少五句。

My classmate   

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【答案】My classmate

Huang Jie is one of my classmates. She is twelve years old. She has long hair, big eyes and small nose. My classmate likes reading book, playing computer games, listening to music, but sometimes she likes playing sports. I like her.

【解析】

这是一篇描述同学的作文。

1.介绍一下谁是自己的同学。

1.介绍该同学的年龄、外貌。性格极其爱好等。

3.最后表达自己对该同学的情感。

本文中运用like doing，listen to do，one of 等句型，满足题目要求。

题型：书面表达 ※难度：一般

【题目】书面表达。

以“Life is changing”为题描述一下你和家人过去和现在生活上的变化。提示：可以从家里用的电器，爸爸妈妈的上班方式以及住房等方面写。

要求：语法正确，不少于40词。

Life is changing   

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【答案】范文：

Life is changing

Ten years ago, we lived in a small house. It was very old. We didn't have a computer or a car. My parents went to work by bike. There was a small tree behind the house. Now we live in a big and beautiful house. There is a very big tree behind my house. We have a computer and a car. My parents go to work by car. We are very happy now.

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