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Last summer, I went to Beijing with my father and mother. We went there by plane. And we stayed in Beijing for a week. We climbed the Great Wall. We were very tired, but the Great Wall was very great. We also visited Temple of Heaven and the Palace Museum. They were very amazing. We went to Wangfujing and went shopping too. It was crowded. We were very happy in Beijing.
【解析】
这是一篇开放性作文,要求写出一次有趣的旅行。范文首先点出作者去年夏天跟父母去了北京旅行,其次描述作者去的交通方式和待的时间。接着细致地描写了作者参观了北京的景点:长城、天坛、故宫还有王府井,同时描述了自己的感受。最后点明很开心。全文首尾呼应,层次分明,详略得当,表达流畅,是一篇不错的范文。