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【答案】Dear Jack,
You say you are coming to Guangzhou soon. How happy I am! Let me tell you something about my home town---Guangzhou.
Guangzhou is in the south of China. It is a modem city. The weather here is warm, so you don't need to bring a lot of clothes with you. There is lots of delicious food and you can't miss it. It is very convenient for you to go shopping because there are many shopping centers. The traffic in Guangzhou is fast and convenient. You can take buses, taxis or subways. People here are honest,kind, polite and hard-working.
I’m sure you will like Guangzhou.
I’m sure you will like Guangzhou.
Best wishes!
Li Fei
Best wishes!
Li Fei
【解析】写法:这是书信体的作文,注意人称和时态。此外,信件给出的开头和结尾用的是齐头式的,所以段落的开头不需要空格。由于是介绍城市,可以分别从它的位置、气候、饮食、交通等方面介绍。
时态:本文主要介绍广州,用一般现在时即可。
句型:文章可适当使用There +be句型。
注意:在写作时,要注意本文时态为一般现在时,要主要单复数的变化。文章以介绍这里的人结尾,体现了一个城市的人文环境。