帮我看看这篇作文咋样MynameisSonghongwei,whoisa13-year-oldboy,Iamstudyatjiaodamiddleschool.Iamgoodatmyclassmate.Icanplaynotonlybasketball,butalsofootball.Ithinkthey’reexciting.Iwanttojointheyourclub.Ilike

问题：帮我看看这篇作文咋样MynameisSonghongwei,whoisa13-year-oldboy,Iamstudyatjiaodamiddleschool.Iamgoodatmyclassmate.Icanplaynotonlybasketball,butalsofootball.Ithinkthey’reexciting.Iwanttojointheyourclub.Ilike

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网友采纳　　最好将第一句改成：Iama13-year-oldboynamedSonghongwei.这样短的句子没必要用定语从句.第二句是现在进行时,将study改成studying；jiaoda中的j大写.第三句你是说‘我能与同学相处的好’吗?Icangetalon...