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问题：柯南英语作文,求纠错TodayIwatchedthe15thmovieofDetectiveConancalledQuarterofSilence.IthinkthatDetectiveConanisagoodandfamouscomic.IwanttoinsroduceittoeverybodyDetectiveConanisaTVcartoon.childreninJapanlove
答案：↓↓↓ 李英姝的回答： 网友采纳 TodayIwatchedthe15thmovieofDetectiveConancalledQuarterofSilence.IthinkthatDetectiveConanisagoodandfamouscomic.Iwanttointroduceittoeverybody. DetectiveConanisaTVcartoon.ChildreninJapanloveitverymuch.Now,moreChinesepeopleloveit,too.ThewriterofitisGoshoAoyama,heisoneofthegreatcomicwritersinJapan.Whenhewasalittleboy,helikedSherlockHolmesverymuch.HestartedwritingDetectiveConanformagazineSundayin1994.Thedetectivestorywasfromthenon KudouShinichi,afamousdetective,isalsoahighschoolstudent.(Heisa17-year-oldguy.Hismotherisawell-knownmoviestarinHollywood.Hisfatherisagreatdetectivestorywriter.)(这一段句式重复,建议修改）HisdreamisbeingthenextSherlockHolmes.Healwayshelpsthepolicetofindmurderers. Onenight,hewithhisgirlfriendnamedMouriRanwasinamusementpark.Hesawasuspiciousmaninblack.Whenhewaswatchingthemantrading.Anothermaninblackhurtedhimandgavehimanewkindofmedicine.Thenhetaked10yearsoffhisage.Whenhewokeup.Hebecamealittleboy!. WithDoctorAgasa'shelp.Hegotsomeusefulthings.Theyhelphimgoonhelpingpeople.NowhisnameisConan.However.Healsowantstofindthemeninblack,andgetbacktobeChinichiKudou. Oh,whatagreatcomic.Ihopethatyouwillloveitasme. 有部分句式仍有加强空间,仅供参考 | 
