请帮我检查一下,这段英语有没有错?我写的.Ithinkthemostimportantthingofapersonishealth.Idreadfallingill,butlastweekendIhadatoothacheagain.Icouldnotsleepwhenatoothachegotmedown.Iamstillhesitatingtogoto

问题：请帮我检查一下,这段英语有没有错?我写的.Ithinkthemostimportantthingofapersonishealth.Idreadfallingill,butlastweekendIhadatoothacheagain.Icouldnotsleepwhenatoothachegotmedown.Iamstillhesitatingtogoto

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曹益平的回答：

网友采纳　　of---to　　Iamafraidofthepainwhichiscausedbythedentisttreatsmytooth最好重写　　既然是BY后面就不能是整个句子　　IhaveevergonetoseeadentistwhenIwasacollegestudent.　　前面是现在时,后面就是过去了晕　　ieverwenttoseeadentistwhen.　　Hesaidthisis时态不对　　看不下去了