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问题：【这篇我给一个国外老师的英语信,求改错ActuallyIdon#39;twannabeabroadcasterbecauseImaintaineconomycontrolsthedevelopmentofsociety.butthereasonofwhyIdecidedtochosebroadcastiswhatIthinkthelanguageabilityorcomm】
答案：↓↓↓ 潘锋的回答： 网友采纳 DearMrs.McGill SorrytodisturbyouandpleaseforgiveformypoorEnglish. I'mNica'scousin.MynameisLeoSong(ALthoughIappearedinMarch,actuallyIjustlovethecombinationofthename),I'mtwentyyearsoldandIwasborninYantaiinShandongprovince.Yantaiisawonderfulplacealthoughtheeconomydoesnotdevelopveryfast,thisportcityendowsmewithapeacefulandbeautifulgrowingenvironmentandithelpsmetodevelopagoodtemper.Agoodtemperdoesn'tmeanthatI'manintroversiveperson.Iamgoodatdancing(poping),singingandspeachinginpublic,etc.I'masophomorewhomajorinbroadcastintop-classartsofthecollegeinShandong. 呵呵,稍微改了下,希望能帮到你哦 | 
