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问题：【英语自我介绍,望达人纠错指正,不甚感激.Goodmorning,teachers,Iamgladtobehereforthisinterview.Firstletmeintroducemyself,mynameisZhangYuanbo,23yearsold.IstudiedinjiangnanUniversity.Itoffersmeachancetodevelopmy】
答案：↓↓↓ 刘心田的回答： 网友采纳 1.Firstletmeintroducemyself,mynameisZhangYuanbo,23yearsold. 应加上主语I'm23yearsold. 2.IstudiedinjiangnanUniversity.Itoffersmeachancetodevelopmyabilities.Duringmycollegeyears,Ilearnedalot. IstudiedinjiangnanUniversity.Itprovidedmewithopportunitiestogainabilities.I'velearnedalotduringthecollegetime. 3,Iamnoonespecial,justacommonmanwithcommonthoughts. I'mnotaspecialmanandjusthavecommonthoughts. 4.Twothingsfillthemindwithever-increasingwonderandawe,themoreoftenandthemoreintenselythemindofthoughtisdrawntothem:thestarryheavensabovemeandthemorallawwithinme. fill改成filling drawnto改成drawingto 5.thinkaboutlife.Ithinkabouthuman.Ithinkeverythingarroundme. 最后一个也该是与前部分一致thinkabout 6.Philosophyisinteresting.Iloveit. 句子结构太简单对于面试我个人认为没有突出特长 IlovePhilosophy,thoughmanypeoplethinkit'stoodifficult,Ifinditinteresting.That'swhatidifferfromothers. 7.建议最后加上一句.Thanksforyourlistening. | 
