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问题：帮忙看下我这篇短文有没有语法错误...作业在发给老师前我还不太放心,主要是语法和措辞方面,通顺不通顺之类的,Withrapiddevelopmentoftransportationandweaponstechnology,morecasualtieswereexperiencedtha
答案：↓↓↓ 刘朝霞的回答： 网友采纳 听起来基本上都顺=） 很好, 记得每段开头要空一点 and前面我不用逗号 用Furthermore代替also会更好. Germany’sU-boatswerealsomentionablebecauseittravelledfasterthanmostshipsandcrewcoulduseperiscopestoviewsituationsabovewater.Theyusedtorpedoestosinkenemyaswell Germany'sU-boatsarealsoworthdiscussingbecausetheynotonlytravelfasterthanmostofthestandardshipsandtheavailableofperiscopesalsoallowsthemtoviewthesituationabovewater.Furthermore,theyalsousedtorpedoestosinkenemy('s)(battleships). | 
