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问题：帮忙修改下英文演讲稿,.标注下哪里有语法错误.Helloeveryone,mynameisLengPinwen.I’mgoldtostandonhereToday.Iwanttotalkingaboutfriendship.Friendshipisanimportantpartofourlife.Everyoneneedsfriends.Buthowtokee
答案：↓↓↓ 吕恬生的回答： 网友采纳 I’mgoldtostandonhereToday 此句中的on应去掉. Iwanttotalkingaboutfriendship. talking应改为talk Friendshipisanimportantpartofourlife. 去掉of Friendshipisn’talwayseasilykept 应改为easilytokeep youshouldtreatherlikeyouhersecrets, 此句逻辑有错.你是不是想表达：你应该把她当做彼此共同的秘密?如果是这样的话,因该是：youshouldtreatherlikethesecretofbothofyou. Keepyourpromisewithyourfriend 这句话前面应加So Wemeteachothertwoyearsago 可以把met换为knew,突出认识 ontheInternet 建议换成bytheInternet,因为前面已经出现on了 WhenIhaveproblems,Iwillaskhertohalpme. 可以换成：sheisheretohelpme.您的这句话太中文式了. pleasegiveyoutrue yourtrueheart 总体来说,还是不错哦! 希望能帮助到你,GoodLuck! | 
