大家帮我看看对不对八年级上册英语第一单元SectionB3a...butI#39;mprettyhealthy.Iexerciseeveryday,usuallywhenIcomehomefromschool.Myeatinghabitsareprettygood.Itrytoeatalotofvegetables.Ieatfruitanddrinkmilkev

问题：大家帮我看看对不对八年级上册英语第一单元SectionB3a...butI#39;mprettyhealthy.Iexerciseeveryday,usuallywhenIcomehomefromschool.Myeatinghabitsareprettygood.Itrytoeatalotofvegetables.Ieatfruitanddrinkmilkev

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李佳桢的回答：

网友采纳　　注意大写.ofcourse改成but更通顺　　Iexerciseeveryday,usuallywhenIcomehomefromschool　　最好改成after的举行你不可能一边回家一边运动吧...