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问题：各位英语大师能不能帮我看看我写的这两段话的语法、用词错误之类的,帮忙改正并发过来,19号以前啊!拜托AnniversaryCelebrationofOurSchoolDecember22th,2023isourschoolof140yearsanniversary.Anniversaryp
答案：↓↓↓ 暴建民的回答： 网友采纳 AnniversaryCelebrationofOurSchool December22th,2010is140yearsanniversaryofourschool.AnniversaryperformancewasheldatPekingUniversitycentennialhall.Andweinvitedmanyoldalumnitoattendthis,likeLeiKeSheng,ZhuMingYing,SunYueBinetc.Besidesstudents'parents,ouruniversityinvitedafamoustalk-showhostLuYiMingofCCTVforouranniversaryperformancehost.Iattendedthecelebrationperformanceaschoir.Ifeelveryglorioustotakeparticipateinanniversaryperformance!Ilovemychorus,Ilovemyuniversity! SpringFestival Everyfamily'swindowswereattachedwithfullofallkindsofpapercutsonFebruary2th,whichwasNewYear'seve.MymotherandIwenttothesupermarkettopurchasethedeliciousfood.Afterbeingbusypreparing,familiessittogetherattablewithrelishingthewholenight.WewatchedtheSpringFestivalEveningParty,anditsooncameto12o'clock.MyfamiliesandIwenttofirefirecrackers,downimmediatelyringingoutourloudfirecrackers.Athome,Ihavereceivedmoneyfromeldership.I'mreallyhappy!TheNewYear,Igrowedone-year-oldagain! 已经修改过了,没怎么动原文. | 
