把下面的英语句子改成正确的关于run-on和fragment的知识点如果没涉及到也请改正谢谢Ifeltscaredandbecarefultoeverytingbecausethiswasmyfirsttimetostaywithmantstudentswhodifferentracesfrommefora

问题：把下面的英语句子改成正确的关于run-on和fragment的知识点如果没涉及到也请改正谢谢Ifeltscaredandbecarefultoeverytingbecausethiswasmyfirsttimetostaywithmantstudentswhodifferentracesfrommefora

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刘海妹的回答：

网友采纳　　没大错,主要是时态一致的问题.Ifeltscaredandwascarefultoeverytingbecausethiswasmyfirsttimetostaywith(mant)studentswhoweredifferentracesfrommeforalongtime.Ijustautomaticall...

齐浩亮的回答：

网友采纳　　这几句话主要是写在同一篇作文里所以主要用过去时可以再帮我改改吗

刘海妹的回答：

网友采纳　　如果这样，第三段也应该用过去时。　　Ifeltscaredandwascarefultoeverytingbecausethiswasmyfirsttimetostaywith(mant?)studentswhoweredifferentracesfrommeandforalongtime.Ijustautomaticallyignoredthesayingbecausealmostnobodywasdaretoasktheirprofessorsquestionsbasedonmypastexperiencesinmyhomecountry.Inaddition,shewouldencouragemethatifIhadanyquestionabouttheeconomicclass,Icouldjustmakeanappointmentduringtheofficehours,orsendane-mailtoher,shewouldtrytosolvemyproblemsassoonaspossible.　　注意，最后一句的send是与make并列的，因前面有could，所以两词都用原型。

刘海妹的回答：

网友采纳　　补充一下。　　……shewouldencouragemethat……里的that多余了。