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问题：Oneday，ourteachertoldusthatwecouldhaveanexamandaskedustogooverourlessonscarefully．However，myfriendLisaspendstoomuchtimeplayingcomputergames．Astheresult，shehadnotimetopr
答案：↓↓↓ 李巍巍的回答： 网友采纳 Oneday，ourteachertoldusthatwecould haveanexamandaskedustogooverour would lessonscarefully．However，myfriendLisaspends toomuchtimeplayingcomputer spent games．As the result，shehadnotimetoprepareandwantedtocopymyanswers．I a refusedherandshebecameangrywithme．Inthatexam，shegotlow scoresby high copy anotherstudent'sanswers．Shewashappyand Iadvisedhertotelltheteacher copying but thetruth．Shewasevenangry．Itwaslaterwhen sherealizedherfaultand angrier that apologizedtotheteacher．Fromthenon，Ihelpedheralotofwithherstudiesand 去掉 shemadegreatprogress．Notuntilthen∧sheunderstandwhatfriendshipwas． 加did 1．could改为would．情态动词错误．句意表达的是过去将来，即我们将要有一次考试，不是表示能力． 2．spends改为spent．时态错误．文章讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态． 3．the改为a．冠词错误．asaresult固定短语，结果． 4．low改为high．考查形容词．句意表达的是考了高分． 5．copy改为copying．动词错误．句中copy作介词by的宾语，要用动名词形式． 6．and改为but．连词错误．句意表示的转折，不是承接． 7．angry改为angrier．形容词错误．句意表达的是暗含比较，意思是更生气了． 8．when改为that．连词错误．itwas…that…构成强调句型，对时间状语later进行强调． 9．of去掉．介词错误．句中alot修饰谓语动词helped，在句中作状语． 10．加did．倒装句错误．notuntil加状语位于句首时，句子要倒装；句中的谓语是实意动词且表示过去，要添加助动词did构成倒装． | 
