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问题：看一下这篇英语作文，有语法错误没？HowI’llspendthesummerholidayWhenthesummerholidaybegins.IamgoingtotakethepianogradingtestinearlyAugust.InJuly,Ispentthewholedayinmyroomtoplaythepianoeveryday.
答案：↓↓↓ 纪恩庆的回答： 网友采纳 首先，一个最大的问题，就是既然是对过去事情的描写，整篇都应该用过去式。而且里面个别措辞也出现错误，由于答案里面不能有颜色变化，我就把修改过的文章直接写出来，你回去对照原文自行再修改一下！HowIspentthesummerholidayWhenthesummerholidaybegan.ItookthepianogradingtestinearlyAugust.InJuly,Ispentthewholedayinmyroomplayingthepianoeveryday.Afteramonth,Ihadthetest,Isleptforseveraldays.AndthenIhadatripwithmyparents.Thisholiday,IwenttoXiamenforfourdays.Duringthosedays,Ihadbeentomanyinterestingplaces.Ihadagoodtime.Exceptplaying,Ididn’tforgettodomyhomeworkaswell.Whenthissummerholidayends,afteragoodrest,I'mreadytostartmynewterm.希望以上答案可以对你的英语写作提高有所帮助，同时祝你英语学习愉快！ | 
