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问题：Somepeoplethinkstudentsshouldlearnmorepracticalcourseslikecomputer,butothersthinktheyshouldlearnmoreabouttheoreticalcourseslikegeographyandmathematics.Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.Today,whattypeofcoursesshoulds
答案：↓↓↓ 开桂坛的回答： 网友采纳 继续回复你之前的问题,我觉得写作的短语和句型可以模仿,但是风格比较难模仿,所以少用模板有好处,因为每个人的逻辑思维不一样,擅长的说理方式不一样,当然时间紧就另当别论了.另外,提出论点要具体,不要泛泛地说有好处,具体到什么方面有好处.最后的总结有点irrelevant,跟大学要深入学习专业似乎没有关系.(PS:我就是昨天答应帮你改的那个) 改动比较大啊.论点不需要多,论证多点吧,281字. Educationistreatedbycountlesspeopleasthevitalpredictorofone’ssuccess.Whetherpracticalortheoreticalcoursesshouldplayamoreessentialroleineducationalsystemhasbeensubjecttowidediscussion.Inmyviewschoolingshouldbedesignedtopreparestudentsforreallifeaswellasunderliningtheacademicaspect. Theideaadvocatesthatanupsurgeinpracticalknowledgeismoreusefulforstudents,owingtothefiercecompetitioninemploymentmarket.Currentemployersshowatendencytorecruityoungsterswhoaremostlikelytoadapttothechangingenvironment,whiletheoutstandingacademicquantificationisnolongerasufficientcredential.Inthiscase,aimingtodealwithcomplexproblemsinreallifesituation,practicalcourses(i.e.computer)layasolidfoundationforstudents’careerdevelopment. However,theoryandabstractconceptualknowledgeareessentialliesinthefactthattheyarefundamentalsofeducation.Forinstance,peoplewouldhaveabetterunderstandingoftheearthafterhavinggeographycourses.Foronething,itlargelyenhancespersonalqualitywhichisthebasicrequirementinmoderncivilizationforeachindividual.Foranotherthing,althoughitmightnotplayacriticalroleinjobhunting,thecommonsenseprovidesacommunicationplatformtoforeignersandeasestheinteractingprocessasatalkingmaterial.Besides,largeamountofinventionsarecreatedfromtheoreticalideasandboostsocialdevelopmentinall-inclusiveaspects.Asidefromvocational-orientedschooling,theoriesthatstudentslearntaretheoriginalsofcreation. Onthebasisofabovefactors,myconclusionisthatpracticalcoursesortheoreticalcoursesareofthesameimportance.Onlybykeepingbalanceofthesetwotypesoflessonscanleadthestudentsintoaprospectivefuture. | 
