【改正下面的英语短文Mr.Smithsoldahousenearaschool.Hespentthefirstweekthreeinpeace.Thencomesanewschoolyear.Everyafternoonafterschoolseveralboyscametoplaythefootballbehindhishouse.TheymadetoomuchnoisethatMr.S】

问题：【改正下面的英语短文Mr.Smithsoldahousenearaschool.Hespentthefirstweekthreeinpeace.Thencomesanewschoolyear.Everyafternoonafterschoolseveralboyscametoplaythefootballbehindhishouse.TheymadetoomuchnoisethatMr.S】

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郭星廷的回答：

网友采纳　　第一行sold改为bought；three应为there；comes改为came；　　第二行playthefootball中the去掉；　　第三行第三个单词too改为so；decided后加to；　　第四行themselves改为them；　　第五行funs改为fun；unless改为if,最后一个单词that改为which；　　第六行haoppy改为happy；　　最后一行but改为and.　　完毕.