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20分求批改作文..本人比较菜;;不会语法..然后请您去我另一个拿分.顺便告诉下这个能得到多少分.题目Somepeoplefeelthatentertainersarepaidtoomuchmoney.DoyouagreeordisagreeTheissueofmakesalarieshasbe

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问题:20分求批改作文..本人比较菜;;不会语法..然后请您去我另一个拿分.顺便告诉下这个能得到多少分.题目Somepeoplefeelthatentertainersarepaidtoomuchmoney.DoyouagreeordisagreeTheissueofmakesalarieshasbe

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网友采纳  题目Somepeoplefeelthatentertainersarepaidtoomuchmoney.  Doyouagreeordisagree  Theissueofmakesalarieshasbeenanon-goingdebateforquitesometimeinthecontemporaryworldamongofficeworkers.Meanwhile,whetherthehigh-paidshouldbegainedbyentertainmentbusinesshasarousedheateddiscussion.Entertainers'emolument,asIseeit,couldneverbeadministeredtoomuch.  However,amongalltheconvincingreasons,theonewhichshouldbestressedisthatmanyordinarypeoplewhoworkinthemedicaldomain,educationdomainandresearchdomainservicestothesocietyhavebeenimmense,buttheyacquirelessmoneythanentertainers.EvensomestarsattainalargeamountofpaymenthasexceedNobelprize,thisisinequitable.  Furthermore,convincingargumentcanbemadethatitappearsaseaofindividualsprobablygiveupschoolstudyandpursuetoobtainamassofwagemucheasierliketheentertainmentstars.Althoughthereareagooddealofordinaryprofessionhaveastalentswhorequirespecialskillsasthosestarsandpossessyearsofedcationandspecialtraining,theresuitisofteninequitable.Thefull-timestudentsaredoubtfulofacceptedeffectofaestheticeducationwhentheydiscoveredthecircs,thisisbadtoculturenewcomers.  Unfortunately,peoplearebecloudedasaresultoftheyonlyseeingstarsoffunwonalotofmoneywhenasdeletedtheybroughtpleasures,makethemhaveahundred-percentrestandawell-likinglifestylefromownmemory.Forexample,theolympicchampionLiuxiangwonhis6thNationalTitleatthe2006NationalAthleticschampionship,quiteanexcitingmatch.  Inconclusion,IthinktheremaybesomeresonswhyentertainmentstarsearnhighsalariesbutoverallIagreethattheyareoverpaid.Governmentshouldimposeheavytaxesandputtingthemoneygiventopeoplewhodeservertheearning.Inthisway,Ibelievethatthosetalentswhomakingastupendouscontributiontosocietywillgettingaphychologicalbalanceandmoredevotionhiswork,canreducedthenegativeinfluencealso.应该打10分有些地方还需修改
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