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问题：大型英文大赛朗诵组自我介绍（听听大家意见）Goodmorning,everyone!It#39;smyhonourtostandheretointroducemyself.MynameisZhangTianlong.MyfriendscallmeRobin.I#39;m___yearsold.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Thayare
答案：↓↓↓ 沈国强的回答： 网友采纳 文章总体写得不错,现改一下,供你参考. Goodmorning,everyone!It'smyhonourtostandheretotellyousomethingaboutme（虽是“自我介绍”,但换成tellyousomethingaboutme更符合英语的习惯）.MynameisZhangTianlong,andyoucancallmeRobin.I'm___yearsold.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily,myfather,mymotherandI（这样表达更简洁,地道）.IthinkthemeaningofFAMILYshouldbe"FatherandMother,ILoveYou".Ilovemyparentsandtheylovemetoo(加上此句,以承接上面family的含义)Now,Iamstudyingin_____Primary(某学校的首字母要大写)School.（Peoplesay省去,“人们说...”是汉语的说法,直译成英语显得别扭）I'malovelyboywithasweetsmile.Inmysparetime,Ilike________(例如readingbooks).Ofcourse,Ilikechallengingmyself,soItakepartinthecompetitionandtrytobecomeamasterofaforeignlanguage.Ilikemakingfriendstoo（加上too更显英语味道）,IhopeIcanmakefriendswithyou(加上此句以承上启下)andlearnfromallofyou(虽然是像其它选手学习是你心里的话,可说出来不必说得那么具体,用allofyou涵盖,既得体,又大气)inthiscompetition.Now,I'lltellyouastoryabout______. | 
