【初中英语作文,希望得到大大的修改!马上就要,ahardworkingclassmateWhentheotherstudentsareplayinghappilyandhavingarest,youcanseeahardworkinggirlstudyingbusily.Fortunately,sheismygoodfriend.Once,sheisdoingadif】

问题：【初中英语作文,希望得到大大的修改!马上就要,ahardworkingclassmateWhentheotherstudentsareplayinghappilyandhavingarest,youcanseeahardworkinggirlstudyingbusily.Fortunately,sheismygoodfriend.Once,sheisdoingadif】

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马帅旗的回答：

网友采纳　　.youcanseeahardworkinggirlstudyingbusily.　　这句有点ChineseEnglish,我建议用therebe句型thereisahardworkinggirl.　　buyssomeexercisebookstoimprovehermarks　　目的不准确,最好是dosomeexercises　　iswhatilearnfrom　　I　　修改下会是不错的文章!