【（英文）一篇记叙一件过去的发生故事IwasvisitedAustralialastyear.Thatwaswonderful.Ilikethezooverymuch.Thereweremanyanimals.Sachaskoala,kangaroo,snackandsoon.Ithinkkoalaandkangaroowereverylovely.Itookmanyp】

问题：【（英文）一篇记叙一件过去的发生故事IwasvisitedAustralialastyear.Thatwaswonderful.Ilikethezooverymuch.Thereweremanyanimals.Sachaskoala,kangaroo,snackandsoon.Ithinkkoalaandkangaroowereverylovely.Itookmanyp】

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韩铁如的回答：

网友采纳　　IwasvisitedAustralialastyear.was不要Ilikethezooverymuch--like用liked,或者enjoyed更好一点Sachaskoala,kangaroo,snackandsoon---sach是suchItouchedthekangaroo--the改成a比较好,前面没有特指...