一篇英语的自我介绍,帮忙看看有没有错的地方!Hello,everyone!MynameisHongXiaofang.Iam13yearsold.IwasborninFuJianbutmowIlivewithmyfamilyinNanjing.IstayinNo.13middleschool.IaminClass4,Grade7.Iamtall.

问题：一篇英语的自我介绍,帮忙看看有没有错的地方!Hello,everyone!MynameisHongXiaofang.Iam13yearsold.IwasborninFuJianbutmowIlivewithmyfamilyinNanjing.IstayinNo.13middleschool.IaminClass4,Grade7.Iamtall.

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耿焕同的回答：

网友采纳　　IstayinNo.13middleschool.改　　Istudyin.比较好.　　HianameisHongRunze.你一定打错了,是：　　Hisnameis.　　Ilikelisteningtomusicandreading.Ireadbookseveryday.IlistentoCDsattheweekend.最好改为：　　Ilovelisteningtomusic.IlistentoCDsattheweekend.Ilikereadingtoo.Ireadbookseveryday.　　everyday好像是并起来的.　　仅供参考.