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问题：Onepersonisstillaperson.buttwopeopleareateam.Ateamcandoeverythingthatseemsimpossible.Tosucceedinlife.Wemustiearnthespiritofcooperation.Firstofall.Wecancatchhappiness,relatiansandfriendshipifwepulltogether.Co
答案：↓↓↓ 康涛的回答： 网友采纳 第一句我觉得最好改为：Onepersonisonlyanindividual,buttwomakeateam. Firstofall这句：relatians应为relations.同时我觉得catch改为get或obtain之类好些. thepoweroflotspeople应改为：thepoweroflotsofpeople,如觉得拗口可改为thepowerofmanypeople Thild打错了应为Third. Aswecanseethetheabove改为：Aswecanseefromabove. hownecesserytobecooperation!改为：Hownecessaryitistocooperate(或tobecooperative)! 最后的两句断句没断好.But前面有个句号.fortheothers后面应该有个句号或逗号. 写得不错啊 | 
