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问题：帮我看看这段话语法错误Well,I’dliketotalkaboutmyfatherwhomIadmiremost.Lastyear,wecelebratedhissixtiethbirthdayandfromthenonhecouldenjoytherestofhislife.Hehadworkedforover40years,servingfirstinarmyandl
答案：↓↓↓ 李浩的回答： 网友采纳 Well,I’dliketotalkaboutmyfatherwhomIadmiremost.Lastyear,wecelebratedhissixtiethbirthdayandfromthenonhecouldenjoytherestofhislife.HehadworkedforMORETHAN40years,FIRSTLYservinginarmyandTHENingovernment.Tomeheisalovingfather,avaliantsoldierandacompetentofficer.ItwasREALLYamazingthathebecamesuchagreatmanconsideringallthehardshipheHASendured.Whenhewasonlytwoyearsold,bothofmygrandparentspassedaway,leaving3childreninpovertyamongwhomtheoldestwasonly9yearsold.IcanhardlyimaginehowtheymanagedtosurviveTHOSEdays.Perhapsbecauseofthis,myfatherlovesHISfamilyverymuch.IstillrememberthehappytimewhenhetoldmestorieseveryeveninginmychildhoodandheWOULDdoanythingtomakemehappy.Wearesoproudofhimbecauseheoncecommandedananti-aircompanyintherealbattleinVietnamand3badgesprovedhispurenerve.Asagovernmentofficer,healsoshowedPEOPLEAIMAGEOFahardworkingmanwhowasalwayswillingtohelpothers. 大写是修改之处. | 
