如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点”1
<p>1。 改变句子的开头方式，不是一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词作状语等。试比较:</p><p>1. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="begins">begins</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="subject">subject</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="predicate">predicate</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="object">object</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="finally">finally</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="adverbial">adverbial</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="adverbials">adverbials</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="participles">participles</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="adverbials">adverbials</span>. <span word="Compare">Compare</span>:</p><p>(原文) <span word="My">My</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cinema">cinema</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="bicycle">bicycle</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="day">day</span>。</p><p><span word="My">My</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cinema">cinema</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="cycle">cycle</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="day">day</span>.</p><p>(修正) <span word="The">The</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cinema">cinema</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="bicycle">bicycle</span>。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="brother">brother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cinema">cinema</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="cycle">cycle</span>.</p><p>(原文) <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="couldn">couldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="crying">crying</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="news">news</span>。</p><p><span word="T">T</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="could">could</span>'<span word="t">t</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="crying">crying</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="heard">heard</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="news">news</span>.</p><p>(修正) <span word="Hearing">Hearing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="news">news</span>， <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="couldn">couldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="crying">crying</span>。</p><p>(<span word="Amendment">Amendment</span>) <span word="hearing">hearing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="news">news</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="could">could</span>'<span word="t">t</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="crying">crying</span>.</p><p>2。 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。例如:</p><p>2. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="article">article</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="patterns">patterns</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="flexibly">flexibly</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="subject">subject</span>-<span word="subordinate">subordinate</span> <span word="compound">compound</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="participle">participle</span> <span word="phrase">phrase</span>, <span word="inversion">inversion</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="ellipsis">ellipsis</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="etc">etc</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>:</p>
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