8年四川高考满分作文一步与一生
<p>路的两旁氤氲着乳白色的雾气，前面是一条悠长悠长的古道，迷离神奇。[形象化的描写，把人带入迷离神奇的氛围中。]</p><p><span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="milky">milky</span> <span word="fog">fog</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="road">road</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="front">front</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span> <span word="road">road</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="mysterious">mysterious</span>. [<span word="the">the</span> <span word="vivid">vivid</span> <span word="description">description</span> <span word="brings">brings</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mysterious">mysterious</span> <span word="atmosphere">atmosphere</span>. ]</p><p>我预备沿着这条布满神秘的古道去寻找自己的幸福人生，一束极细的光线从遥远的天际投射过来，抚摩着那历经悠悠岁月的古道刻痕，它闪耀着夺目的光线。</p><p><span word="I">I</span>'<span word="m">m</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="mysterious">mysterious</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="fine">fine</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="projected">projected</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="distant">distant</span> <span word="sky">sky</span>, <span word="caressing">caressing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="marks">marks</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="shines">shines</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="dazzling">dazzling</span> <span word="light">light</span>.</p><p>一串串脚印散落在岁月的路途中，我要去寻找那决定人一生的那一步，专心去发现一个刻满幸福的出口。[“我要去寻找那决定人一生的那一步”，点题。]</p><p><span word="A">A</span> <span word="string">string</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="footprints">footprints</span> <span word="scattered">scattered</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="determines">determines</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="concentrate">concentrate</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="finding">finding</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="exit">exit</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span>. ["<span word="I">I</span>'<span word="m">m</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="determines">determines</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="person">person</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="life">life</span>". ]</p><p>我渐行渐远，我渐进渐远……</p><p><span word="I">I</span>'<span word="m">m</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="away">away</span>, <span word="I">I</span>'<span word="m">m</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="away">away</span></p><p>终于，我发现路在此时分成了两个岔口，两扇高大的门摆在面前，它们的上面镌刻着“一步与一生”，苍劲的字体中流淌着布满理性的溪流。</p>
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