我是喜欢的一首诗
<p>着手上的唐诗宋词，我突发奇想，我已经不小了，我能不能作一首诗呢？我冥想了一会儿，就象瞎子摸象一样，不懂。所以我跑向能诗善画的叔叔那去。</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="Tang">Tang</span> <span word="poetry">poetry</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Song">Song</span> <span word="poetry">poetry</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="whim">whim</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="small">small</span>, <span word="can">can</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="poem">poem</span>? <span word="I">I</span> <span word="meditated">meditated</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="while">while</span>, <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="blind">blind</span> <span word="man">man</span> <span word="touching">touching</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="elephant">elephant</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="didn">didn</span>'<span word="t">t</span> <span word="understand">understand</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="ran">ran</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="uncle">uncle</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="poetry">poetry</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="painting">painting</span>.</p><p>“叔叔，写诗的要点是什么？”我急着问。</p><p>"<span word="Uncle">Uncle</span>, <span word="what">what</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="poetry">poetry</span>?" <span word="I">I</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hurry">hurry</span>.</p><p>1、诗句简短而意义丰富，</p><p>1. <span word="Poems">Poems</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span>,</p><p>2、诗要分行，</p><p>2. <span word="Poetry">Poetry</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="divided">divided</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="branches">branches</span>,</p><p>3、诗的韵律感、节奏感较强。</p><p>3. <span word="Poetry">Poetry</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rhythm">rhythm</span>.</p><p>4、出美丽的想象(从平凡中看出不平凡)。</p><p>4. <span word="Make">Make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="imagination">imagination</span> (<span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extraordinary">extraordinary</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ordinary">ordinary</span>).</p><p>5、出动人的情意(加入感情)。</p><p>5. <span word="Stir">Stir</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="one">one</span>'<span word="s">s</span> <span word="feelings">feelings</span>.</p><p>这就是写诗的要点。必须好好斟酌。”叔叔平静地说。</p><p><span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="poetry">poetry</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considered">considered</span>. " <span word="Said">Said</span> <span word="uncle">uncle</span> <span word="calmly">calmly</span>.</p><p>“诗句简短意义丰富……”我一直在重复着叔叔所说的几句话，想了许久，悟出了一些明理，我便开始动笔。我准备写美丽的景色，取个题目《江南阅景》，第一句，我写道“空中飞花几多愁”，愁字体现了我当时的心情，不错！第二句写柳树“江边柳数几多柔”，对，柔字体现柳条飘动的情景，第三句写大雁“碧天大雁掠成行”，最后一句写总结“此景清美化心愁”。嗯，写得很美，总体就是“空中飞花几多愁，江边柳数几多柔。碧天大雁掠成行，此景清美化心愁。”读读，咦？诗中有两个“几多”，重复，我改什么好呢？“空中飞花飘散愁。”？不行不行，这样意思都变了，那“空中飞花飘扬愁。”吧！可以，就用这个了！</p>
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