2017届高考英语书面表达练讲指导评析（第三部分）考场习作评析（四）
<p> 2017届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第三部分考场习作评析）（四）</p><p> 请你根据下列这幅图写一篇英语短文。要求：</p><p> 1.描述图画；</p><p> 2.就图画所反映的内容进行评论或提出自己的建议；</p><p> 3.词数：150左右。</p><p> 这是我们仿照北京市高考所出的题目。跟北京卷不同的是本书面表达要求词数达到150左右。同时考生可以按照半开放式作文的方法进行写作，也可以按照开放式作文的方法进行写作。我们这儿所选的考场习作为开放式的。</p><p> 【考场习作】</p><p> (5)<span word="It">It</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="funny">funny</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="factory">factory</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="producing">producing</span> <span word="thick">thick</span> <span word="smoke">smoke</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="smoking">smoking</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="forbidden">forbidden</span> <span word="there">there</span>. (6)<span word="Compared">Compared</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="smoke">smoke</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="factory">factory</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cigarette">cigarette</span> <span word="smoke">smoke</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span>. (7)<span word="However">However</span>, <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="exist">exist</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="restrict">restrict</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convince">convince</span> <span word="others">others</span>. (8)<span word="As">As</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="saying">saying</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> “<span word="sweep">sweep</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="door">door</span>”. (9)<span word="Therefore">Therefore</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="ourselves">ourselves</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="others">others</span>. (10)<span word="Only">Only</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="harmonious">harmonious</span> <span word="society">society</span>.</p><p> 在评析考生考场习作之前，先让我们来看一看该书面表达的最基本的要点是什么。</p><p> 1.描述图片内容</p><p> 2.自己的评论</p><p> 【总体评价】</p>
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