2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第一板块 能力层级（一）第8节(北师大版)
<p> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="teaches">teaches</span> <span word="morality">morality</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="practices">practices</span> <span word="immorality">immorality</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wolf">wolf</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sheep">sheep</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="skin">skin</span>. 满口仁义道德，一肚子男盗女娼的人就是披着羊皮的狼。(比喻)</p><p> [学以致用] 用“优雅性原则”翻译下列句子 1．要求这位秘书写报告时要快速、准确、全面。(排比) <span word="The">The</span> <span word="secretary">secretary</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="write">write</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>，<span word="accurately">accurately</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="throughly">throughly</span>. 2．老师说他是个差生，因为他要等到考试时才学习、做作业漫不经心、而且缺乏学习动力。(排比) <span word="The">The</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="waited">waited</span> <span word="until">until</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="minute">minute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exam">exam</span>，<span word="completed">completed</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="careless">careless</span> <span word="way">way</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="lacked">lacked</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span>. 3．世界就是个舞台，所有的男人和女人都是演员。(比喻) <span word="The">The</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="stage">stage</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="players">players</span>. 4．自我批评的重要性就如同空气和水一样。(比喻) <span word="Self">Self</span><span word="criticism">criticism</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="water">water</span>. 第八节 亮点句式润色的七大原则 [技法指导] 作文要想得高分，必须要有吸引阅卷老师眼球的亮点。如何打造亮点句式呢？大家可以遵循以下七个原则。 原则一：新颖性 改掉句中的俗词，或合理调整句子语序，都有助于提升句子的新颖性。新颖的句子能为评卷者在评卷过程中带来良性体验，能有效提升作文表达和分值。 1．变换用词 行文时，既要避免使用俗词，又要避开冷僻词汇。 (1)<span word="Though">Though</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="you">you</span>’<span word="ll">ll</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="success">success</span>. →<span word="However">However</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="you">you</span>’<span word="ll">ll</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="success">success</span>.(2017·山东高考满分作文) 无论有多困难，你最终会找到一种干它的方法并取得成功。 (2)<span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wise">wise</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="perfection">perfection</span>.</p>
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