2016届高三（牛津版）英语一轮复习讲义 写作 第六讲 打造写作亮点提升写作档次
<p> 第六讲 打造写作亮点提升写作档次</p><p> 阅读下面短文体会其中高级词汇和句式的使用。尽管父母爱我如初但随着年龄的增长眼界的开阔<span word="Perfect">Perfect</span> <span word="Parents">Parents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="Mind">Mind</span>”为题写一篇120个词左右的短文谈谈理想中的父母应该是什么样的。<span word="Perfect">Perfect</span> <span word="Parents">Parents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="Mind">Mind</span></p><p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="me">me</span>；<span word="what">what</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wearwho">wearwho</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="with">with</span>，<span word="what">what</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span>...<span word="But">But</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="adult">adult</span> <span word="now">now</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="decisions">decisions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="life">life</span>.</p><p> <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="decisions">decisions</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="they">they</span>’<span word="d">d</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="textbooks">textbooks</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sea">sea</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="exercises">exercises</span> <span word="only">only</span>; <span word="other">other</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="count">count</span>，<span word="like">like</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>，<span word="music">music</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="extensive">extensive</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="wish">wish</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="equal">equal</span>；<span word="they">they</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="include">include</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="familyfor">familyfor</span> <span word="I">I</span>’<span word="m">m</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="voice">voice</span> <span word="heard">heard</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="me">me</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="trust">trust</span> <span word="me">me</span>，<span word="and">and</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>.</p><p> 提升写作档次的窍门就是增加文章中的亮点句式打造亮点句子巧妙布局谋篇。一、词汇的选择和使用要多样性词汇的选择要新颖独到在有把握的前提下使用在阅读中碰到的高级词汇相信阅卷者会对你的文章刮目相看。试体会下列句子黑体部分被括号中的高级词汇替代后的效果。<span word="About">About</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="charge">charge</span>，<span word="does">does</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="cover">cover</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="entrance">entrance</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="visiting">visiting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="listed">listed</span>？(<span word="As">As</span> <span word="for">for</span>)<span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="move">move</span>.(<span word="in">in</span> <span word="favor">favor</span> <span word="of">of</span>)</p>
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