2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十六）
<p> 2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十六）</p><p> 去年寒假我同父亲去乡下看望奶奶，我多年未回家乡，看到那儿发生了很大的变化。这次故乡之行使我学到了不少东西。我打算今后每两年回去一次。学生习作·外教批改</p><p> <span word="During">During</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="winter">winter</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span>1<span word="countryside">countryside</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="visit">visit</span> <span word="mygrandma">mygrandma</span> <span word="with">with</span>_<span word="my">my</span>_<span word="father">father</span>.2</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="a">a</span>_<span word="large">large</span>_<span word="change">change</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="there">there</span>.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="came">came</span>_<span word="back">back</span>3 <span word="returned">returned</span>，<span word="theyare">theyare</span>_<span word="live">live</span>4 <span word="were">were</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dirty">dirty</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ducks">ducks</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="any">any</span>5 <span word="otheanimals">otheanimals</span>.<span word="Now">Now</span>，6 <span word="But">But</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="winter">winter</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="returned">returned</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span>_<span word="big">big</span>_<span word="house">house</span>_<span word="to">to</span>_<span word="birth">birth</span>_<span word="chickens">chickens</span>.7 <span word="They">They</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="have">have</span>8 <span word="had">had</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="poles">poles</span></p><p> <span word="in">in</span>_<span word="which">which</span>_<span word="it">it</span>_<span word="has">has</span>9_<span word="some">some</span>_<span word="fish">fish</span> <span word="fishponds">fishponds</span>.<span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="year">year</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="it">it</span>_<span word="and">and</span>_<span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fish">fish</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="villagers">villagers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="grandma">grandma</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="village">village</span> <span word="have">have</span>10 <span word="had">had</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="storeyed">storeyed</span></p><p> <span word="houses">houses</span>，<span word="evidencing">evidencing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="life">life</span>11 <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="better">better</span>_<span word="and">and</span>_<span word="better">better</span>12 <span word="had">had</span> <span word="improved">improved</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>.</p><p> <span word="During">During</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="trip">trip</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="they">they</span>_<span word="are">are</span>13 <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="villagers">villagers</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>-<span word="working">working</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="characteristics">characteristics</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="worth">worth</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="learning">learning</span>.</p><p> <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="end">end</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="trip">trip</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span>_<span word="planned">planned</span>14 <span word="that">that</span>_<span word="I">I</span>_<span word="would">would</span>_<span word="come">come</span>_<span word="back">back</span> <span word="planned">planned</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="return">return</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="years">years</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="admitted">admitted</span>15 <span word="agreed">agreed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>.</p><p> ,</p><p> 旁 批</p><p> 1．<span word="country">country</span>或<span word="countryside">countryside</span>前要加定冠词<span word="the">the</span>。</p>
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