2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十九）
<p> 2017届高考英语考前冲刺精品复习讲义（北师大版）：写作（十九）</p><p> 李华在校学习成绩很好。他做完作业后喜欢看电视。他的父亲不允许他看电视，怕李华会因看电视而影响功课。李华却不这么认为。</p><p> 学生习作·外教批改</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Hua">Hua</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="top">top</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="school">school</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="likes">likes</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="fatherdisagrees">fatherdisagrees</span>1 <span word="disapproves">disapproves</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span>2 <span word="will">will</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="study">study</span>3 <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span>.<span word="However">However</span>，<span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Hua">Hua</span> <span word="holds">holds</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="view">view</span>.</p><p> <span word="He">He</span> <span word="insists">insists</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="shouldn">shouldn</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="banned">banned</span> <span word="completely">completely</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="thinks">thinks</span>4 <span word="believes">believes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="won">won</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="addicted">addicted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>.<span word="If">If</span> <span word="one">one</span>5 <span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="cope">cope</span>_<span word="with">with</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="in">in</span>_<span word="harmony">harmony</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="entertainment">entertainment</span> <span word="in">in</span>_<span word="a">a</span>_<span word="proper">proper</span>_<span word="way">way</span>6 ，<span word="his">his</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="won">won</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="affected">affected</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span>.<span word="It">It</span>_<span word="can">can</span>_<span word="not">not</span>_<span word="only">only</span>7 <span word="Not">Not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="informed">informed</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span>8</p><p> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="affairs">affairs</span>，<span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="profound">profound</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>，<span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="broadening">broadening</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="horizons">horizons</span>.</p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Hua">Hua</span> <span word="believes">believes</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="abandon">abandon</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="it">it</span>.<span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>，<span word="he">he</span> <span word="intends">intends</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span>_<span word="a">a</span>_<span word="word">word</span>9 <span word="talk">talk</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convey">convey</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span>.</p><p> ,旁 批</p><p> 1．<span word="disagree">disagree</span>不能用来描述某人的行为，应该用<span word="disapprove">disapprove</span>(不赞成)。</p><p> 2．这是真实条件句，因此要用<span word="will">will</span>而不是<span word="would">would</span>。</p>
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