2014考研英语写作小作文批改范文：求职信（二）
<p>0-4分</p><p>第一篇</p><p><span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Sir">Sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="Madam">Madam</span> ,</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="recruitment">recruitment</span> <span word="information">information</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> (加<span word="a">a</span>)<span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> .</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="children">children</span> (不能理解你的意思).<span word="My">My</span> <span word="proficiency">proficiency</span> <span word="of">of</span>(改为<span word="proficient">proficient</span>) <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="described">described</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="enclosed">enclosed</span> <span word="resume">resume</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="requirement">requirement</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Depatment">Depatment</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Launguage">Launguage</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Literature">Literature</span>(这里填专业名称).<span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="broad">broad</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="served">served</span> <span word="as">as</span>(<span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="as">as</span> 后面加职位名称) <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="middle">middle</span> <span word="school">school</span>. .</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="convenience">convenience</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="match">match</span>. <span word="Thank">Thank</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="consideration">consideration</span>.</p><p>第二篇</p><p><span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="sir">sir</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="madam">madam</span>,</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="writting">writting</span>(拼写错误，改为<span word="writing">writing</span>) <span word="this">this</span> <span word="letter">letter</span>(删除) <span word="to">to</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span>(改为<span word="as">as</span>) <span word="secretary">secretary</span>.</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Beijing">Beijing</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="June">June</span> 2013.<span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="major">major</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Now">Now</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="comunication">comunication</span>(改为<span word="communicate">communicate</span>)<span word="with">with</span> <span word="foreigner">foreigner</span> <span word="fluently">fluently</span>. <span word="Also">Also</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="past">past</span>(改为<span word="passed">passed</span>) <span word="the">the</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="Majors">Majors</span>-<span word="Brand">Brand</span> <span word="eight">eight</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="past">past</span>(改为<span word="passed">passed</span>) <span word="national">national</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="brand">brand</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="enter">enter</span>(加<span word="ed">ed</span>) <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="skilled">skilled</span>(改为<span word="skillfully">skillfully</span>) <span word="operate">operate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="majority">majority</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="software">software</span>(加<span word="s">s</span>).</p>
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