八个可能毁掉你雅思写作的小细节
<p>一、冠词的使用</p><p>1. 原文：<span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="ofpeople">ofpeople</span>...</p><p>诊断：元音单词<span word="increasing">increasing</span>前的不定冠词应用<span word="an">an</span>而不是<span word="a">a</span>。这样的错误在口语中不容易犯，但写到纸上时就容易忽视。所以说，写完的作文不仅要重看，更要“重读”，才能借助语感揪出这样的小错误。</p><p>修改：<span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="ofpeople">ofpeople</span>...</p><p>2. 原文：<span word="However">However</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span>... <span word="on">on</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>.</p><p>诊断：<span word="issue">issue</span>是可数名词，但这里既没有用冠词又不是复数，显然是有问题的。</p><p>修改：<span word="However">However</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span>... <span word="on">on</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="controversial">controversial</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>.</p><p>二、名词单复数</p><p>3. 原文：<span word="However">However</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="allocate">allocate</span> <span word="fund">fund</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="services">services</span> ...</p><p>诊断：<span word="fund">fund</span>表示政府拨款的“资金”，此处应该使用复数，表示多笔拨款。</p><p>修改：<span word="However">However</span>,<span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="allocate">allocate</span> <span word="funds">funds</span> <span word="topublic">topublic</span> <span word="services">services</span> ...</p><p>4. 原文：<span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="vitalto">vitalto</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="but">but</span>...</p><p>诊断：句子主语<span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span>与谓语<span word="are">are</span>不一致，主语是单数，而谓语是复数用法。此处<span word="public">public</span> <span word="services">services</span>泛指“公共服务”，应用复数。</p>
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