教你如何写出具有雅思范儿的高分作文
<p>说到雅思的考官范文，相信很多备同学的感受都是“敬而远之”, 认为考官的范文都是以生词难句组成的。事实真的是这样么?但凡可以静下心来推敲考官范文的学生， 都会发现考官的范文并没有我们的想象的那么难。甚至还有点“简单”—— 用词简单，但句式很多样。</p><p>先给大家看一篇考官范文，来看看考官是如果用简单的词写出不简单的句子的。此文选自剑桥雅思真题集8- <span word="Test">Test</span>1.</p><p>首先进入到文章的开头段：</p><p><span word="A">A</span> <span word="child">child</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="basic">basic</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="only">only</span>.(1)<span word="It">It</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="included">included</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="generation">generation</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="society">society</span>.(2)<span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>. (3)</p><p>无论是第一句话中的“<span word="never">never</span>”及“<span word="only">only</span>”也好， 还是最后一句的“<span word="not">not</span>”及“<span word="alone">alone</span>”也好， 考官都运用了我们在汉语表述同样会用得到的一种表达形式——双重否定表肯定， 从而增强句子语气。 第二句中的<span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="generation">generation</span> 也是不错的用法， 这也是我们上一讲中提到过的<span word="less">less</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="vocabulary">vocabulary</span>。 短语中的单独每个单词挑选出来大家都认识， 但是放到一起的这种说法， 大部分同学还是无法掌握的。</p><p>接下来我们进入到文章的主体段2：</p><p><span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="mustrespect">mustrespect</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="obey">obey</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="values">values</span>.(1) <span word="Educatingchildren">Educatingchildren</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="obey">obey</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="begins">begins</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="widely">widely</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>.(2)<span word="They">They</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="how">how</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="behave">behave</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="world">world</span>. (3)</p>
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