托福作文点评：高一生的托福作文
<p> 托福作文时间短，任务大，很多考生会在语法、句型及拼写等方面犯错误。其实这些错误在托福备考过程中，大家也可能会犯，不过因为不重视，或者无人指点，所以没有及时改正。本文中，老师为大家整理一篇高一生的托福作文的点评，希望对大家有所帮助。</p><p> 托福写作真题：</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span>, <span word="food">food</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span>. <span word="Has">Has</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="live">live</span>? <span word="Use">Use</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="answer">answer</span>.</p><p> 托福写作范文：</p><p> <span word="Nowadays">Nowadays</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="fast">fast</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="negative">negative</span>.</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="shortened">shortened</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nutrition">nutrition</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="producers">producers</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="protein">protein</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vitamins">vitamins</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="contain">contain</span>, <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="shorter">shorter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="shorter">shorter</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="satisfy">satisfy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="need">need</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="money">money</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="reason">reason</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="nutrition">nutrition</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="calories">calories</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="health">health</span>.</p><p> <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="ignored">ignored</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Sometimes">Sometimes</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="styles">styles</span>, <span word="tastes">tastes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="colors">colors</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="feelings">feelings</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="musicians">musicians</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="tunes">tunes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="express">express</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="passions">passions</span>. <span word="Fast">Fast</span> <span word="preparation">preparation</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="art">art</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="taste">taste</span>, <span word="same">same</span> <span word="style">style</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="meal">meal</span> <span word="boring">boring</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="appetite">appetite</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="meals">meals</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="dull">dull</span> <span word="supper">supper</span>.</p>
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