托福写作中常见的失分点总结
<p> 1.结构不平行</p><p> 例：<span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="TOEFL">TOEFL</span> <span word="score">score</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="books">books</span>.当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。</p><p> 2.不知所云</p><p> 例：<span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="mouth">mouth</span>.</p><p> 3.段落过长，不分段，主语与动词一致问题</p><p> <span word="She">She</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mine">mine</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>.主语和动词在数方面不一致。</p><p> 4.句子别扭</p><p> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="heated">heated</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="soup">soup</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="microwave">microwave</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shape">shape</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="container">container</span> <span word="changed">changed</span>.措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。</p><p> 5.不要使用缩写</p><p> 在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(<span word="cant">cant</span>，<span word="dont">dont</span>，<span word="its">its</span>，<span word="well">well</span>，<span word="theyve">theyve</span>等等)，而应当使用单词的完整形式(<span word="cannot">cannot</span>，<span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span>，<span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span>，<span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span>，<span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span>等等)。</p><p> 6.关联词语重复</p><p> <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="school">school</span>，<span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="test">test</span> <span word="scores">scores</span>.不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。</p><p> 7.句子不完整</p><p> <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="passing">passing</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tests">tests</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>， <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span>.句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。</p>
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