托福写作满分心得：挖掘句子多样性
<p> 考完托福,也有时间写点东西.想就英语写作方面谈点个人的心得体会.</p><p> 一、英语写作的特点.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="characteristics">characteristics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="formal">formal</span> <span word="writing">writing</span></p><p> 1.名词化趋势</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="much">much</span>.--<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="eater">eater</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="clock">clock</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desk">desk</span> <span word="reminds">reminds</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>.--<span word="I">I</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clock">clock</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desk">desk</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reminder">reminder</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="cried">cried</span>, <span word="laughed">laughed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disappointed">disappointed</span>.--<span word="There">There</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="moments">moments</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tears">tears</span>, <span word="moments">moments</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="laughter">laughter</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="moments">moments</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="disappointment">disappointment</span>.</p><p> 注意:名词化趋势的句子当然还有动词, 目的是尽量把表达句子中心意思的那个词汇用名词表达.符合英文的习惯.</p><p> 2.无灵主语(区别于被动语态)</p><p> 我们中文写作中,习惯以人做主语,而英文则相反,习惯以物做主格.</p><p> <span word="More">More</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="studied">studied</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="decades">decades</span>.</p><p> --<span word="The">The</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="decades">decades</span> <span word="witness">witness</span> <span word="target">target</span>=_<span word="blank">blank</span> <span word="class">class</span>=<span word="infotextkeywitnessed">infotextkeywitnessed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="study">study</span>.</p><p> <span word="Looking">Looking</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="window">window</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="view">view</span>.</p><p> --<span word="A">A</span> <span word="glance">glance</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="window">window</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="view">view</span>.</p><p> 注意: 名词化趋势和无灵主语常常是相结合的.</p><p> 3.被动语态</p><p> 这一点大家比较熟悉,不详细讲.比如:</p>
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