一篇经过“斧正”英语短文
<p>刚才去一个英语学习论坛，看到<span word="nephewliang">nephewliang</span>网友用英文写了一篇短文，大意是介绍他所在的办公室，然后请求其他网友斧正。果然没过多久，<span word="wing">wing</span>1978网友来了，举起大斧，给这篇短文正了正（笑）。我个人认为，这篇短文很有代表性，其中出现的一些错误，是国内英语初学者经常犯的，所以下面我想把这篇短文中有明显错误的一组句子挑出来，请各位看看原文是怎样写的（第一行），斧手又是怎样正的（第二行）。为便于初学者理解，我对文字做了适当的修改和简化，因此下面的内容与帖子的内容略有出入。</p><p>①<span word="When">When</span> <span word="entering">entering</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="office">office</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="kept">kept</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="order">order</span>.</p><p>②<span word="Stepping">Stepping</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="office">office</span>，<span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="order">order</span>.</p><p>③进入办公室，可以发现一切都井井有条。</p><p>①<span word="The">The</span> <span word="file">file</span> <span word="keepers">keepers</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="classified">classified</span> <span word="way">way</span>.</p><p>②<span word="The">The</span> <span word="file">file</span> <span word="cabinets">cabinets</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="classified">classified</span> <span word="data">data</span>.</p><p>③左边的文件柜用来存放分类文件。</p><p>①<span word="The">The</span> <span word="white">white</span> <span word="bookcases">bookcases</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="manual">manual</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span>.</p><p>②<span word="The">The</span> <span word="white">white</span> <span word="bookcases">bookcases</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="manuals">manuals</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span>.</p><p>③右边的白色书柜装满了各种各样的手册。</p><p>①<span word="The">The</span> <span word="ivory">ivory</span>-<span word="white">white</span> <span word="desks">desks</span>，<span word="decorated">decorated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="bonsais">bonsais</span>，<span word="are">are</span> <span word="shining">shining</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lighting">lighting</span>.</p>
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