增强英语语句表现力有效的方法
<p>纵观多年来国家四、六级英语作文考试，考生作文成绩欠佳的主要原因除了准确性和连贯性差之外，语句软弱无力也是不容忽略的一个方面。因此在英语写作教学中，如何增强语句表现力的问题必须引起我们足够的重视，以提高学生写作的表达质量。为此，笔者结合自己的写作教学实践，针对该项技能的训练提出了一些切实可行的有效做法，供广大同仁和英语学习者参考借鉴。</p><p>一、避免使用语意弱的<span word="be">be</span>动词。</p><p>1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如：</p><p><span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="bare">bare</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="brown">brown</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="drab">drab</span>.</p><p><span word="Revision">Revision</span>:<span word="The">The</span> <span word="brown">brown</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bare">bare</span> <span word="trees">trees</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="drab">drab</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span>. (转换为前置定语)</p><p><span word="Or">Or</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="landscape">landscape</span>, <span word="bare">bare</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="brown">brown</span>, <span word="begged">begged</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="green">green</span>. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)</p><p>2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如：</p><p>1) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="players">players</span>.</p><p><span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="The">The</span> <span word="team">team</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="well">well</span>.</p><p>2) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="One">One</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="elimination">elimination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>.</p><p><span word="Revision">Revision</span>: <span word="One">One</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="eliminates">eliminates</span> <span word="tardiness">tardiness</span>.</p><p>3、在以<span word="here">here</span>或<span word="there">there</span>开头的句子中，把<span word="be">be</span>动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如：</p><p>1) <span word="Weak">Weak</span>: <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="opportunity">opportunity</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="promotion">promotion</span>.</p>
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